SHOULD SCHOOLS
PROVIDE MORAL EDUCATION FOR YOUTH, OR SHOULD INSTRUCTION IN VALUES
BE LEFT TO PARENTS?
Moral education can be described as an
education that can help to teach ethics, values and good behaviors such as
politeness to young children. In our society, there are two opposed views that
schools should provide moral education for youth or instruction in values
should be left to parents. Some people still have biases about the teaching of
values in schools. In my view, education which is given in the family is not
adequate for children, so schools provide moral education for youth. I think
that education which is systematically given by specialists will be more
effective for children.
First,
children can learn the moral values in classes where the moral education is
given with the help of specialists. As we know, the first education starts with
family. Children learn the basic things like what is right or wrong from their
family, but it does not mean that all of the children know them because sometimes
family is not a good role model for children in terms of drugs and alcohol.
Parents educate their children not to smoke cigarettes; however, many children
live in homes where the cigarette is smoked. In my opinion, values depend on our
character and personality. The most important thing is to understand children’s
characteristic features and directing them according to their traits. For these
reasons, values education classes should add curriculums.
Second, the ethic is an
important topic and children should learn some ethical values such as fairness
and honesty. These can be learned in schools where provide children moral
classes with the help of experts in their early ages. Experts know how to teach
and develop children’s moral values Experts train children with some special
methods such as working with a group students like therapy speaking them good
sides of the honesty. After that, values education programs assist children to
shape their life according to good values. As long as they practiced and come across
ethical topics, they accept to be honest and they can reflect what they have
learnt to their social life.
Finally, moral values should
be a major subject from kindergarten to college. Children should learn moral values and
respect the rights of others. Parents cannot help their children to develop
their moral values because parents do not know how to teach values and direct
their children and parents also should be educated in this topic. Sometimes,
they can make mistakes in terms of being a good model and misdirect their
children’s future behaviors. For example, some drivers cross red lines when
there are no cops around. Sometimes they do not slow down when they are
approaching a pedestrian lane even if they see that a person is crossing
pedestrian lane. This kind of events can cause accidents due to the fact that
lack of moral values.
In conclusion, schools
provide moral education for youth because parents cannot teach the values their
children properly. With a good education which schools provided, children can
distinguish what is right or wrong, so they can reflect good behaviors to their
social life and they can make a decision between good and bad behaviors.
Briefly, schools and specialists who will lead children have an important role
to teach children moral values.
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